Feedback

- There are some shaky shots which could be re-shot.
- There needs to be smoother transitions between the shots.
- Work on the sound and find some suitable music for the graveyard scene.
- There are gaps which need to be filled in - with what? These will be filled with shots of the ghost on the cellar stairs.
- Link the scenes clearer with more footage.
- The connection needs to be clearer between the characters in the cellar and the character from the graveyard.

From this feedback we have found out the bad parts of our production, by knowing these we are now able to improve upon them so that the end product will look much better overall. We will use smoother transitions and try to work on the sound to make the music more suitable for the scene it is played in. We will get more footage to fill in the gaps, we already know what we will be filling these gaps in with. The people who gave the feedback didn't think that the connection was very clear from characters, we therefore will attempt to make this clearer however not too clear as we like the enigma that this creates, also we like the shakey shots used as they help to add to the emotions felt by each individual character. I'm glad we got this feedback as now we can work on these areas which have being pointed out to us.