Pitch of Ideas

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Idea 1
        They said it was quite a good idea, these are some of the questions asked...

• Where will it be set? - We decided that it would be set in a quarry. this is because it will give us the desired effect of the sand, it is the best ground which we could use that will suit our setting.
• Is it practical? - It can be done but some changes might have to be made, such as the building bursting in to fire, this could be hard to do because it would be impossible to set buildings on fire with health and safety regulations, and it would be rather difficult to do it all through special effects.
• Do you have reliable actors? - Some but were looking for a few more, we will make sure that they are reliable so they act for all of the time that we need them to act for. They will also have to be reliable so that they turn up for all of the shooting days/times which they are needed for.

Idea 2      
         They said this idea sounded quite exciting and original, they wondered how practical it was...

• Will it all get into two minutes? - Yes we should do because it will use fast editing, however we may have to cut down some of the dialogue used in it, as usually there isn't much dialogue in opening scenes.
• Will it meet opening conventions - Yes it will meet the opening conventions of a horror film, this is because it will include titles, music and lighting these will help set the tone of the whole film.
• Name? - We haven't decided on a name yet, we will have to think of this and make sure the name ins't already taken by a already made film.

Out of the two, the one they preffered was idea 2, this is our favourite as well and it is the one we have decided to go with. However we have decided to edit our idea so it can be the best it can possibly be, this is by cutting some of the dialogue out to make the scene more interesting so people don't have to concentrate too much in the beginning as they would find this boring and not watch the remaining of the film. We will also make sure that it meets all the conventions which will make it a better horror, we will also think of a name which will relate to the storyline of the film.